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Ascension-chapter 2 by Rinmaru Ascension-chapter 2 by Rinmaru
Please :heart:Click here:heart:to play this game!
The game has a million grammar & spelling mistakes because English is not my main language...Honestly i made this game just to try something new...(something other than a dress up game)
I had a lot of fun coding this!!!

It takes a long time to load so please wait :)!
Have fun!
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It was absolutely beautiful.

Yes there were a few grammatical errors, mostly capitalization or simple things that could have been overlooked in haste, but honestly I can't be certain I picked up on all of them. I was too excited to really care and they weren't that big of a deal. The biggest problem I had was one of the fighting scenes, can't remember which, Aida's outfit converted back to her island attire.

I loved the customization options~

I would, however, loved to actually through a romantic scene. Even though Seena's interruption was adorably hilarious.

I loved it overall. <3

And I will try my best to patiently wait for chapter three!
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Critique by TheSardine Sep 5, 2013, 2:42:47 PM
This is S.U.P.R.I.S.I.N.G with all it's letters!

I played it completely... But it got stuck a pair of times, and the ending confused me!(unless it was for putting a bit of suspense before chapter 3) I'm beginning to think that I've skipped some parts of the story :C
(It got stuck after the "bloody dream" (the last time Aida goes to sleep) and while/after she was talking-fighting with D.)

I love the beginning! It made me feel distress, and, if that was what you wanted us to feel like, then great job! It worked!And some other moments made laugh my ass off,like the one with the monkey and the banana...

Awesome art, the character's new look is better than before (specially Jade's) (Well, Zander's face is not as sweet as in the first chapter, but... ) *u*(I sometimes want to hit F. so hard... Is it bad?)

Then, there's a point in the story when, if you've chosen the "original" hairstyle for Til, the one that appears is the "sexy" one... I think it happens while they're in Ildis...

Clumsy people like me needs more time to fish, just sayiiing~~ e3e *exaggerated wink*

And I've got a suggestion...Well, maybe you already had the same idea before and trew it away, but, why not making shorter chapters? I think that way you wouldn't need to put the "loading" thing in the middle... Athough, I'm not an expert at making games, I just know how to play them and not much more... And yours are getting more and more awesomer!I have to say.

And this is my first attempt to post a critique... ufffff... Don't kill me please o3o
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libra127 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Forever fangirling about this. Happy Happy..Onion  OMG this story and plot inspired me in doing a story.... must jot down plot quickly.  Hatsune Miku-15 (Happy)  
Aysuna7 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Chapter 2! And I really like Captain Nina! I think she is my new favourite! Awesome Job! <3
fany-lady-vampire Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student General Artist
how old is Senna? in here? 
damaralover1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Is Tillie wearing a skirt or pants???
Lightfiretheteenmare Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dear,People if the boat secne is not working for you on chrome,firefox,internet explore.

Then get Safari or maybe opera.
CoalSmudge Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
For some reason, every time I try to play Chapter 2, I get stuck on the first scene (with the light) because once it fills the screen everything just goes black. It seems to work on other computer's though (I use a Macbook Pro).
AMorticianToDIEFor Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love Zander's smirk, I really like how he progresses emotionally through the 3 chapters, he starts off as a very moody character and through the course of the chapters becomes more emotionally aware and willing to show his feelings :3
Carameja Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
just-a-potterhead Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist
loved this chapter! cant wait for 4
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