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Ascension-chapter 2 by Rinmaru Ascension-chapter 2 by Rinmaru
Please :heart:Click here:heart:to play this game!
The game has a million grammar & spelling mistakes because English is not my main language...Honestly i made this game just to try something new...(something other than a dress up game)
I had a lot of fun coding this!!!

It takes a long time to load so please wait :)!
Have fun!
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It was absolutely beautiful.

Yes there were a few grammatical errors, mostly capitalization or simple things that could have been overlooked in haste, but honestly I can't be certain I picked up on all of them. I was too excited to really care and they weren't that big of a deal. The biggest problem I had was one of the fighting scenes, can't remember which, Aida's outfit converted back to her island attire.

I loved the customization options~

I would, however, loved to actually through a romantic scene. Even though Seena's interruption was adorably hilarious.

I loved it overall. <3

And I will try my best to patiently wait for chapter three!
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Critique by TheSardine Sep 5, 2013, 2:42:47 PM
HOLY POTATOES,RIN!
This is S.U.P.R.I.S.I.N.G with all it's letters!

I played it completely... But it got stuck a pair of times, and the ending confused me!(unless it was for putting a bit of suspense before chapter 3) I'm beginning to think that I've skipped some parts of the story :C
(It got stuck after the "bloody dream" (the last time Aida goes to sleep) and while/after she was talking-fighting with D.)

I love the beginning! It made me feel distress, and, if that was what you wanted us to feel like, then great job! It worked!And some other moments made laugh my ass off,like the one with the monkey and the banana...

Awesome art, the character's new look is better than before (specially Jade's) (Well, Zander's face is not as sweet as in the first chapter, but... ) *u*(I sometimes want to hit F. so hard... Is it bad?)

Then, there's a point in the story when, if you've chosen the "original" hairstyle for Til, the one that appears is the "sexy" one... I think it happens while they're in Ildis...

Clumsy people like me needs more time to fish, just sayiiing~~ e3e *exaggerated wink*

And I've got a suggestion...Well, maybe you already had the same idea before and trew it away, but, why not making shorter chapters? I think that way you wouldn't need to put the "loading" thing in the middle... Athough, I'm not an expert at making games, I just know how to play them and not much more... And yours are getting more and more awesomer!I have to say.

And this is my first attempt to post a critique... ufffff... Don't kill me please o3o
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Naiyadreamer Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Student Digital Artist
The can't go past the part after saving Nina and it's really frustrating. It keeps on going back to it. What do i do?
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Kytheira Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
I have just the same problem. Neither Firefox nor Opera works ... :(
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libra127 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Forever fangirling about this. Happy Happy..Onion  OMG this story and plot inspired me in doing a story.... must jot down plot quickly.  Hatsune Miku-15 (Happy)  
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Aysuna7 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Chapter 2! And I really like Captain Nina! I think she is my new favourite! Awesome Job! <3
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fany-lady-vampire Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student General Artist
how old is Senna? in here? 
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damaralover1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is Tillie wearing a skirt or pants???
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VannilaIcecream Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Dear,People if the boat secne is not working for you on chrome,firefox,internet explore.

Then get Safari or maybe opera.
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CoalSmudge Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
For some reason, every time I try to play Chapter 2, I get stuck on the first scene (with the light) because once it fills the screen everything just goes black. It seems to work on other computer's though (I use a Macbook Pro).
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MerlesLittleSquirrel Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Love Zander's smirk, I really like how he progresses emotionally through the 3 chapters, he starts off as a very moody character and through the course of the chapters becomes more emotionally aware and willing to show his feelings :3
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Carameja Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ZZAAANDERRR!! WE FOUDN YOU BAACK TTwTT
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:iconjust-a-potterhead:
just-a-potterhead Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist
loved this chapter! cant wait for 4
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:iconvby294:
vby294 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Damn you Zander!!! Why are you so sexy!?!
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StarStuddedSkies Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I can't get past the boat scene on Chrome, Firefox, or Internet Explorer.
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Derukuhime Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm still stuck on the boat scene ._. chrome and internet explorer just ain't havein' it
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SeaCrest-Star Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm having an issue getting past the boat scene...I've tried it in both Firefox and Chrome...help?
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victorian300 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
this is a really good visual novel amazing:D (Big Grin) Heart free avatar 
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ivyhaddock Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
I cant get it to work on my macbook. Any suggestions. 

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Shelby2398 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OH MY GOD. I ship Zander and Aida more than any couple in a long time. :D They have such a sweet relationship! This is such an amazing novel, I love it so far. Can't wait for chapter 3! When will it be out?
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lolabunny613 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is my favorite visual novel ever!!!! I'm so excited for chapter 3 :happybounce:  
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TheUnBroken5 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Ok, I really need to know where to find the songs that played while I was playing the game. 
I found them when I hit 'Credits', and they took me to www.audiojungle.com and I managed to download them. But that site is weird, 'cause a voice says "AudioJungle" from second to second in the songs and it's annoying, that's why I wanna know another way to download them. I didn'i find them on youtube.
I'm sorry for my bad english, I'm from Romania. 
Please, if anyone knows something.. It would be great.

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qdbear Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I enjoyed playing this  :excited: CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER Clap 
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nkmblackhyuuga Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
I hope that in the next chapter you put more points to save the game ... (I closed the page 3 times by internet, and I was leaving Ildis already Y.Y)
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RZ-desu Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Can you please make Diego a love interest for Aida! PLEASE!!!!
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KatyCatGirl Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
When is the 3rd coming out???
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:iconrinmaru:
Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:) end of March 2014
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KatyCatGirl Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
kk thx Excited!!! :)
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KatyCatGirl Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
please Never Ever in a Million years stop making these! These are amazing and I luv Zander and Aida so cute!!! :) ur doing good don't stop 
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:iconrinmaru:
Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
<3 Thank you so much!!!!
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KatyCatGirl Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
Ur welcome Big fan by the way :)
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:iconingechan:
ingechan Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
whyyyy!!! Chapter 3, I simply can't wait for it! this was awesomeness overload!
-I think I might be addicted to this game :P
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Novaqua Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I can't wait for chapter 3! Also I LOVE how you can change some of the other characters appearance at the beginning of the game.
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mieshalove691 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Check out my pic of Aida and Jace's twin kids
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AleilaNymph Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jace is just so~~~ *faints*
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:iconrinmaru:
Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:heart: :P
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Dark-Automaton Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've finally decided to do something about the lack of stuff in the Ascension wiki! I added the Moon elf and Lith pages! I also edited some character pages While i was at it. :)
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Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
O_O Ascension wiki?
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Dark-Automaton Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, there's already an Ascension wiki. It's still a work in progress, I think it only has about 13 pages at the moment but it exists. :)
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Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
O_O Do you have a link?
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Dark-Automaton Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much :heart: O_O
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Dark-Automaton Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :D
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:iconrinmaru:
Rinmaru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
;_; This makes me so happy...
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Dark-Automaton Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
By the way, how's the Ascension couple maker going?
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BlueIceFeather Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
Ah I love this so much! My friend showed it to me and now I am such a Zaida fan...god...but I can't wait for chapter 3!!!!!
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ciao-7 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really cool looking characters!! :D 
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LadySmugleaf Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eiiii! i love Ascension! I am such a Zandia (or is it Aider?) shipper!
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shyanne4cad Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've heard Zaida
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LadySmugleaf Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so have i since i posted that.
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:iconrinmaru:
Rinmaru Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:D People usually call it Zaida or ZanderxAida :P ! Thank you ^^!
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