Ok, you seriously need to make a chapter 4! The three you have made so far are totally and utterly A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!! I just CAN'T wait for the next! Some of your dialogues made me laugh my head off and plot keeps hold till the end! Also...........I AM HOPELESSLY IN LOVE WITH JACE!!! XD Anyway, I REALLY hope to hear more from you! A 4th chapter maybe? Please.....Pretty please?
I can't wait!!! :3 Zander is so freakin adorable with his need to keep his emotions in check cuz he's dangerous xD it makes his tender moments all the more special. I loved the scene near the end of chp 2 where Aida started glowing again and his reaction to it
I hope you keep their current hair choices as well as the new ones, especially Zander's "rebellious" style :3 I <3 that style on him so much
On a somewhat different subject, I would love to see couples pictures of Aida and Zander :3 and to be fair I suppose of Aida and the other guys lol
In my personal opinion, all three of the girls look goddamn sexy and the guys look markedly less so XP Especially Zander! I liked his 'Rogue' design in chapter two. Hopefully we'll still get the option to choose what the characters look like because personally, I would not have picked these designs for the guys.