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Manga creator page.11(The End)by *Rinmaru

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The page you have been so anxiously waiting is finally here!!!! As this manga creator serie has finally came to an end i would like to annaunce that

and i allready started working on a new manga creator serie with a new theme,new characters and environment! (and maybe a new genre?) Enjoy everyone

!!! I love you! ♥

The artwork is by very talented

!
Game by me

Critique by !iloveMaribel May 30, 2012, 7:38:38 PM

This game is so amazing! All of Rinmaru's games are. This one in particular is adorable. Kiss scenes are always the best. >w< hehe There is really nothing bad I can say about this game or any other one because each one makes my shoujo born heart flutter! These games have made it possible for me to create my own love story. I'm very sad that this is the last one in the series. I wish you would make more! haha Seriously, I love these games. They are my latest addiction. Rinmaru, you really understand the heart of a shoujo obsessed otaku who wants nothing more than true love. You are truly amazing at what you do!

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Critique by ~KiraOnTheNetz May 30, 2012, 6:44:08 AM

As the finale for the manga creator series, it stands to reason that this game would be the most well-done of them all. In comparison to the other manga creators, this one is smooth and well-done. It lacks the uncertainty in the fabric folds that appeared around the middle of the series, and as of yet I have been unable to find any significant display errors in this one. This is well-worth the wait. By allowing the heroine to spend the finale kissing any mix of the characteristics of the primary and secondary males, this game allows for more imagination on the part of the player, and gives it greater value as a stand-alone game. The angle and view of the kiss gives the viewer an impression of being close enough to see the details, but not so close that the viewer feels like an interloper, and by consolidating the options to only one page for each character while maintaining full functionality, the game appears more streamlined and easier to play.
However, the game is not perfect. The folds of the heroine's hair do not quite match up with her ponytail in some options, and with the female's profile covering up most of the male's facial features, he appears almost blank.
Still, other than a few matters of personal taste, I can find nothing else keeping this game from being perfect. Good job, Rin and Milly!

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~EmiTheOtter Nov 25, 2012 Hobbyist Filmographer

OMG,I made my OC and my favourite charachter kissing scene with this...and I melted away!!!

~Tealangel Jun 18, 2012 Student Writer

Give us a SNEAK PEEK of the the manga series! We want to know!~

~bybyhime Jun 5, 2012 Student Artist

hehe .... get him girl

~GuitarSiren Jun 1, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Oh thank GODDDDDD this one's over. Nothing against it, but so many people thought they were "mangaka" when they're just playing a dress-up game and were actually serious about it. And you still never included any masculine guys D:

~sexy-KIBA Jun 1, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

NOT THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~GamerChicXP Jun 1, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

Aww! DX It ends? But that's good there will be another. o.o

~Tealangel Jun 1, 2012 Student Writer

And that's the end! ^_^ I have a request for you,Rin!
Divide the comics. The old one is page 1-11. Don't delete the games. And there's the part 2 part! That's it!

~cam0001 May 31, 2012 Student Digital Artist

So cool! but i think there should be a fight page! I wanna see my OC's (Tae and Keshin) fight for the girl they love!!! ^^

~SilverRelic12 May 30, 2012 Student Writer

I just love this! <3 I've been waiting for this to make my Manga, and now it is almost complete!
I also don't just do these for the manga, I use them to make my character scenes. The first one I did was my character Adri and my friend's character; Ark. <33 SOOO CUTE!!!
Anywho! I just love this manga! And all of your dress up games! You are very talented and skilled! ;3

~Lilnanny May 30, 2012 Student Filmographer

These are great! Good job.

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