The page you have been so anxiously waiting is finally here!!!! As this manga creator serie has finally came to an end i would like to annaunce that and i allready started working on a new manga creator serie with a new theme,new characters and environment! (and maybe a new genre?) Enjoy everyone !!! I love you! ♥
This game is so amazing! All of Rinmaru's games are. This one in particular is adorable. Kiss scenes are always the best. >w< hehe There is really nothing bad I can say about this game or any other one because each one makes my shoujo born heart flutter! These games have made it possible for me to create my own love story. I'm very sad that this is the last one in the series. I wish you would make more! haha Seriously, I love these games. They are my latest addiction. Rinmaru, you really understand the heart of a shoujo obsessed otaku who wants nothing more than true love. You are truly amazing at what you do!
As the finale for the manga creator series, it stands to reason that this game would be the most well-done of them all. In comparison to the other manga creators, this one is smooth and well-done. It lacks the uncertainty in the fabric folds that appeared around the middle of the series, and as of yet I have been unable to find any significant display errors in this one. This is well-worth the wait. By allowing the heroine to spend the finale kissing any mix of the characteristics of the primary and secondary males, this game allows for more imagination on the part of the player, and gives it greater value as a stand-alone game. The angle and view of the kiss gives the viewer an impression of being close enough to see the details, but not so close that the viewer feels like an interloper, and by consolidating the options to only one page for each character while maintaining full functionality, the game appears more streamlined and easier to play. However, the game is not perfect. The folds of the heroine's hair do not quite match up with her ponytail in some options, and with the female's profile covering up most of the male's facial features, he appears almost blank. Still, other than a few matters of personal taste, I can find nothing else keeping this game from being perfect. Good job, Rin and Milly!
Oh thank GODDDDDD this one's over. Nothing against it, but so many people thought they were "mangaka" when they're just playing a dress-up game and were actually serious about it. And you still never included any masculine guys D:
And that's the end! ^_^ I have a request for you,Rin! Divide the comics. The old one is page 1-11. Don't delete the games. And there's the part 2 part! That's it!
I just love this! <3 I've been waiting for this to make my Manga, and now it is almost complete! I also don't just do these for the manga, I use them to make my character scenes. The first one I did was my character Adri and my friend's character; Ark. <33 SOOO CUTE!!! Anywho! I just love this manga! And all of your dress up games! You are very talented and skilled! ;3
However, the game is not perfect. The folds of the heroine's hair do not quite match up with her ponytail in some options, and with the female's profile covering up most of the male's facial features, he appears almost blank.
Still, other than a few matters of personal taste, I can find nothing else keeping this game from being perfect. Good job, Rin and Milly!
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